高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文2014年安徽
高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文2014年安徽
題目：
為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開(kāi)辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專(zhuān)欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說(shuō)了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封回信。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1.表示理解并給予安慰;
2.提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)120左右;
2.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;
3.信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
考點(diǎn)：考察半開(kāi)放性作文
【參考范文】
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：
本文屬于半開(kāi)放性作文，要為你編輯Jamie的口吻回復(fù)Worried的求助信，他的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。要注意書(shū)信的格式和特殊用詞。
要點(diǎn)：
1.很遺憾聽(tīng)說(shuō)對(duì)方有此問(wèn)題。并解釋每個(gè)人都可能會(huì)遇見(jiàn)這樣的問(wèn)題，所以不必?fù)?dān)心。只有的是要學(xué)會(huì)控制自己的脾氣。
2.提出建議：與信任的人進(jìn)行交流，告訴別人你的困擾，釋放自己的壓力。同時(shí)多參加各種戶外活動(dòng)，和朋友多玩球類(lèi)運(yùn)動(dòng)。保持樂(lè)觀的心態(tài)。
對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【一句多譯】
每個(gè)人都會(huì)有過(guò)這樣的一段時(shí)期，在這時(shí)情況都很糟糕，所以你不要太擔(dān)心了。
(1)The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much.
(2)It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much.